Analza the fox

[Akuma Harren]

Name:Analza Harren

Age:Round 1 year old

Gender:Male

Rank:Pet

Village/Country:

Personality/Attitude:Fun, cool, amazing to play with, and loves a good fight.

Chakra Nature:Fire

Appearance or Pictures: Red, Red eyes, with white all the way down his stomach, and white paws

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Relatives/Family:Owner-Akuma

Equipment/Inventory:Claws, Teeth

Known Jutsu:Believe it or not this fox has jutsu. But Akuma does the hand signs

Fire style: sends fire out of Analza's mouth.

Fire skin: Name says it all.

Growth:Makes the fox riding size.

Fire clone:Makes Another fox made of fire.

Fire Fox:Analza speeds at the enemy with fire all around him.

Weaknesses:

Water:Analza hates water, if he is touched by any liquid...He will stop and not move for 2 hours.

Feelings:Analza can't stand seeing his owner get hurt, if Akuma does get hurt and Analza is there then Analza will hide and not come out until his owner calls him.

Background/History:Analza used to be hated in the village. He would steel food, steel jewlery(For whatever reason), but one day Akuma showed up, and at that time the fox was getting beaten by the villagers, But Akuma took him in and they became really good friends.

[Chu Sando]

Well, it is just a pet. So the small history makes sense I guess.
well I accept. 1/3

[Shinzui]

Personally I do think there should be a little bit more, I understand its just a pet, but it just seems like this bio is a little slapped together real quick, I can not really approve it without more. For me the history is way to laid out with no detail and way to short, yes even for a pet it should have a little more.

[Uzumaki Naruto]

I also think this thing is a little too... strong... to be a 'pet'.

It seems to be a summon. And 'missing nin' in Akuma's bio doesn't give me his strength really. So it should be hard to summon so you don't just go and win every battle. I know little about him; can he talk? More personality if that's the case. And the history is very dull. You need more description.

[Akuma Harren]

why do you think he is too strong?

Just a question

[Uzumaki Naruto]

Well, I think he has too many jutsu himself to be a little pet that follows someone around. Even with summoning animals, the summoner must perform the handseals for the animal to be able to cast a jutsu.

[Crystal Hatake]

Think of the jutsu he is using, does he have any weaknesses? and I agree with them, there should be more to the bio. (later ill make a bio for fang to show you. i am currently rpging with him, but due to a certain bloodpack, anyone would be able to summon him.)

[Akuma Harren]

Hey but his owner does need to do the hand seals for him.....not that I'm arguing...mmmm

[Uzumaki Naruto]

Oh! I didn't see that. I'm sorry.

Nothing's wrong then. x3;;

I make mistakes. Thank you for correcting me.

[Akuma Harren]

Okzay

[Crystal Hatake]

Although, he should have more weaknesses then that. You'll see when i create a bio for Fang, both of his strengths and weaknesses combine or, are unified with each other. . . and he has more then just one weakness.

[Akuma Harren]

ummmmmmmm..........oooooooookkkkkkkkkkaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy






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