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Post by seizetsu on Jul 21, 2007 23:35:41 GMT -5
Yumiko sat on the ruins of the school of which she was once taught. The air was eerily still, not a sound to be heard but rock on rock as her feet moved pebbles across the destroyed wall of the academy. One hand held a rag and the other held a Shinobigatana as the twin blade sat on her lap, waiting for its turn to be cleaned from the old crusted blood that covered its blade. 'Messy man he was...dirting up my blades like this with out hardly putting up a fight.' She thought to herself. 'And I barley got a meals worth for his body.' She slid the rag down the blade, grimacing the small town that paid her so little to kill a man that murdered so many. 'Murderers are getting weaker...and with weak killers come less coin.' Yumiko paused for a second to brush a long strand of hair from her face, then returned to the task. Despite her concentration in her work, her ears continuously strained for sound. On her arrival, Yumiko had thought she had eyes upon her and being caught off guard was not something Yumiko liked.
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Post by Crystal Hatake on Jul 24, 2007 20:25:21 GMT -5
Bright red eyes were watching her from the shadows, doing his best to stay hidden, Fang moved forward. A gust of wind blew over him, making his fur sway. After what happened, I can't see why anyone would still be living here, he thought to himself as he inched his way forward. Fang was a wolf, but not an ordinary one. Unlike regular wolves, he could talk and communicate with humans. Ontop of that, his fur wasn't grey or white, it was silver, an extremly rare color for his kind. I wonder what Kakashi will say when I report this!
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Post by seizetsu on Jul 27, 2007 15:46:38 GMT -5
((Sorry it took me so long to reply)) The hand of Yumi tightened when she saw a boy ran in through the ruins yelling something about being late. 'Late? What can he be late for in a destroyed place like this?!' She shook her head, wondering if the boy was crazy. Yumi looked around quickly, still feeling like she was being watched, and it was not the boy.
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Post by Crystal Hatake on Jul 27, 2007 21:47:52 GMT -5
[akuma, first of all, don't put anything that sounds like a swear, secondly your posts don't make sense and thirs, they need to be longer]
Fang stood there motionless, she must be the one that Kakashi wanted me to follow. he thought to himself as he continued to walk forward, trying not to make noise. The trees around the ruined village swayed as a cool breeze blew through them.
[sorry, short post thanks to akuma. . .]
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Post by Crystal Hatake on Jul 27, 2007 23:21:07 GMT -5
[First off Akuma, no yelling at staff. Take note that I have been helping the Uchiha brothers, and yes little by little they are improving. You could improve to if you'd just listen to tips that we give you. Now that post is longer which is good, but who are you talking to? also there is plenty to say besides swearing, explain your surroundings, how your character feels or why they are there. Pay attention to how Yumiko and I rp, and you'll get the idea.]
Fang heard the yelling and squinted his eyes, it was because of his sensetive hearing. Now what! he didn't care anymore if the female ninja spotted him, that crude man was going to get it. He turned and faced Akuma, with a snarling face, why don't you state your name first?
{again short, remember to leave room, or make a way for others to reply.]
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Post by seizetsu on Jul 27, 2007 23:38:52 GMT -5
After seeing the wolf and hearing it talk, Yumiko slid down from the ruin she was sitting on and raised an eyebrow. 'Did that wolf...just talk?' Yumiko tucked the rag away but left her swords tight in her hands. "What is going on here?" She asked sternly. A slight breaze moved two strands of hair from her face as her eyes darted between the two of them.
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Post by Crystal Hatake on Jul 27, 2007 23:57:41 GMT -5
This idiot just interupted my mission! Fang glared angrily at Akuma, getting ready to pounce. A deadly silence filled the air as Fang waited for a reply.
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Post by seizetsu on Jul 30, 2007 15:24:38 GMT -5
She let out a deep sigh as she looked from the wolf to the boy. "My name is Yumiko if it really matters." Her grip upon her blades did not loosen. Yumiko had a bad issue with trusting. "So someone care to tell me what in the world is happening here?"
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